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Hoopa and Hoopa Unbound (Edited)

PostPosted: 19 Mar 2017 20:28
by Rashky
Models and Textures made by me, Rashky

Hoopa:


Shiny Hoopa:
Spoiler:


Hoopa Unbound:


Shiny Hoopa Unbound:
Spoiler:


The Prison Bottle:

Re: Hoopa

PostPosted: 20 Mar 2017 00:14
by Kingdamo
Looks Awesome great job!

Hoopa

PostPosted: 20 Mar 2017 02:35
by xanderindalzone
sorry but ilchampo forgot to update his progress on the sheet, he made it 8 months ago :(

720 Hoopa - Pixelmon Mod by ilchampo on Sketchfab

Hoopa

PostPosted: 20 Mar 2017 02:40
by xanderindalzone
try doing simple pokemon, like klefki, scatterbug, etc

Hoopa

PostPosted: 20 Mar 2017 04:37
by xanderindalzone
also for pokemon with small mouth, you dont have to model it too, just draw it, cus if you model it you're making unneeded polygons/faces :/

Re: Hoopa

PostPosted: 20 Mar 2017 05:43
by Rashky
I will continue and make Unbound anyways, I work hard too, on my models so Pixelmon can keep being the wonderful mod it is, so I can get a chance too = )

Hoopa and Hoopa Unbound

PostPosted: 23 Mar 2017 02:35
by xanderindalzone
The hoopa unbound model is quite good for a start, but it needs a bit more work ImageImage These are the things you should fix:
The neck should be shorter and a bit more rounded at the front
The face shouldnt be that stretched, and it should be a bit more wider
The chest should be fatter, its a bit thin right now
The fingers should be fatter and shorter
The hand holes should be smoothed(the geometry)
also the tail has some irregular geometry and the pink line isnt completely straight

Hoopa and Hoopa Unbound

PostPosted: 23 Mar 2017 19:47
by Rashky
Thank you for your feedback, I edited the Hoopa Unbound model. If it needs any further fixing, please let me know

Hoopa and Hoopa Unbound

PostPosted: 24 Mar 2017 04:42
by xanderindalzone
ok it looks better now, but it needs some few more fixes:
The neck needs to be much shorter, almost like it didnt have any neck Image , also the end part of the black tatoo on its nose needs to be more pointy https://gyazo.com/1830ffd7f01a793d33141b9e106b56a0 , also fix these weird bends on the skirt XD https://gyazo.com/cdf9f16f0296780d6b837a44b47015ea and make all the fingers the same size and thickness :) https://gyazo.com/63239dd59fd43a2c1e4d54553985a906 ... i think thats all, ooohh and some of the inner line of the arm holes have to be straight and i dont know if its a sketchfab bug but the texture is a bit glitchy inside too https://gyazo.com/ad80fc77572dfb07f1ca947f898fc7eb

Re: Hoopa and Hoopa Unbound

PostPosted: 24 Mar 2017 18:12
by Rashky
Okay, it should be fixed now, please, let me know if there is anything left for fixing : )