[gilbert12888]

- 26 Jan 2014 16:09 #103465

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Update 1(Tilted trunk and bigger tail):

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Update 2(textures)

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Update 3(fixed nose)

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Let me know what you think
-Gilbert

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[Milo]

- 26 Jan 2014 16:17 #103467 Another great model

1. I think the tail should be slightly bigger not too much just a little
2. The tip of the trunk should not be straight it should be angled like this one

[gilbert12888]

- 26 Jan 2014 18:42 #103548 Updated
-Gilbert

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[Milo]

- 26 Jan 2014 18:43 #103550 Looks good to me

[gilbert12888]

- 26 Jan 2014 20:13 #103607 Updated with textures.
-Gilbert

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[Awesomejrana]

- 26 Jan 2014 22:31 #103689 The end of the trunk needs to be a bit shorter and it might just be me but the tip of the trunk needs to be a little less flat. Other than that looks great!

[SutaGames]

- 27 Jan 2014 04:42 #103795 Well, I hope you don't mind me adding in a little suggestion. I'm also going to be using Milo's Phanpy reference to show you.

As you can see, I'm highlighting the legs. Why? WELL, to me they look a little... too long? And also the back leg of your model seems to not be very smooth, as it looks like it is jutting out. To summarize my suggestion, it'd be nice to see you shorten the legs, blend them into the front of your model more, and smoothen the back leg. It's perfect otherwise. Goodluck! uvu

Let Suta be your friend. c:

[Killaz2000]

- 27 Jan 2014 05:07 #103797 Phanpy needs a mouth and make the Ears a little bigger

[ofekbeje]

- 27 Jan 2014 09:13 #103845 I think the nose is a bit too strait...

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[gilbert12888]

- 27 Jan 2014 20:18 #104078 It has a mouth but you can't see it cause it's closed.

I updated the nose.
The legs and ears are the right size and position I checked them with a reference model.
-Gilbert

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