[karrybird]

- 19 Jun 2013 01:42 #47082 you can't, it isn't gen 1.

~stop this train, i wanna get off and go home again. i can't take the speed it's moving in, i know i can't, but honestly, won't someone stop this train.~

[SPG]

- 19 Jun 2013 01:44 #47083 that, and it still needs some work

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[Cynark]

- 19 Jun 2013 02:08 #47085

that, and it still needs some work

Ok specifics?

[KuryoZT]

- 19 Jun 2013 11:46 #47170 Don't mind him too much, he's SPG.
As for what he said, both are right, it's not gen 1, so no approval for now, and it does need some work.
First, the back, the way you staircased it downward, no good. It's supposed to round a little, and absolutly not get down, bigger end.
Second, the fin under the belly should be bigger, like 2* bigger.
And finally, the mouth looks better ope, I don't know if you'll be able to do it, I'm just not loving the closed mouth, it's a freaking fish, they always have their mouth open.

That's all I can really say for now. Good luck.
Oh, and while it's great to give pictures of your update, please use the "Img" button above your post, so we can see the pictures in the thread, my comp don't really help if I have to go through five tabs to give good comments

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[Cynark]

- 19 Jun 2013 22:49 #47365

Don't mind him too much, he's SPG.
As for what he said, both are right, it's not gen 1, so no approval for now, and it does need some work.
First, the back, the way you staircased it downward, no good. It's supposed to round a little, and absolutly not get down, bigger end.
Second, the fin under the belly should be bigger, like 2* bigger.
And finally, the mouth looks better ope, I don't know if you'll be able to do it, I'm just not loving the closed mouth, it's a freaking fish, they always have their mouth open.

That's all I can really say for now. Good luck.
Oh, and while it's great to give pictures of your update, please use the "Img" button above your post, so we can see the pictures in the thread, my comp don't really help if I have to go through five tabs to give good comments

Ok revised again, thanks for the feedback, i dont know what you meant by "It's supposed to round a little, and absolutly not get down, bigger end."





I stepped the slopes of its back hump and throat more, i also expanded and re textured the anal fin as well as the horn

[karrybird]

- 20 Jun 2013 02:16 #47400 looking at that texture map i still have reason to believe that you are using flat blocks in those fins....

~stop this train, i wanna get off and go home again. i can't take the speed it's moving in, i know i can't, but honestly, won't someone stop this train.~

[Cynark]

- 20 Jun 2013 04:07 #47410

looking at that texture map i still have reason to believe that you are using flat blocks in those fins....

Yeah is that not advised?

[ryancpexpert]

- 20 Jun 2013 07:18 #47450 this is a ok model, looks about what i remember Remoraid looking like.

[KuryoZT]

- 20 Jun 2013 08:27 #47468

Yeah is that not advised?

Flat blocks are a no-go. They just render horribly in-game. Pictures in karry's tutorial, in gen1 Model Feedback thread.

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[Polifroeg]

- 20 Jun 2013 08:31 #47470 All I could say is reduce the blockiness of its body good job

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