[KIRILL_Z]

- 17 Oct 2013 19:05 #82160 So, since I made Bonsly, here's Sudowoodo, the cheerleading tree-rock:

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Front View

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Side View

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Top View

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Weird Angle

Shiny:

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Any constructive criticism is welcome (it really helped with Celebi, thx for that).

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Celebi has petit limbs, arms are too big, too long and too square
feet are also too big

If Celebi doesn't stop eating soon, the limbs wont be petit.

[tkgamer18]

- 17 Oct 2013 19:19 #82164 Nice model but the branch on top should be thicker and make him this position:http://cdn.bulbagarden.net/upload/1/1e/185Sudowoodo.png

[KIRILL_Z]

- 17 Oct 2013 19:25 #82166 He's in the position he's in so that if he gets approved, he will be able to be animated. If I put him in that position, it will be a static gliding sudowoodo. I will fix the horn thingy.

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Celebi has petit limbs, arms are too big, too long and too square
feet are also too big

If Celebi doesn't stop eating soon, the limbs wont be petit.

[Nova Spartan]

- 17 Oct 2013 19:35 #82167 It's a great job aside from what TK said to fix. Well done.

[KIRILL_Z]

- 17 Oct 2013 19:37 #82168

Nice model but the branch on top should be thicker and make him this position:http://cdn.bulbagarden.net/upload/1/1e/185Sudowoodo.png

I didn't make it that pose, but I added one to him, and made the horn thingy bigger:

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Compare this to the first pose and tell me which is better.

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Celebi has petit limbs, arms are too big, too long and too square
feet are also too big

If Celebi doesn't stop eating soon, the limbs wont be petit.

[KIRILL_Z]

- 17 Oct 2013 19:38 #82169

It's a great job aside from what TK said to fix. Well done.

Aw thanks Nova...

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Celebi has petit limbs, arms are too big, too long and too square
feet are also too big

If Celebi doesn't stop eating soon, the limbs wont be petit.

[Pro_Malti]

- 18 Oct 2013 01:31 #82226

It's a great job aside from what TK said to fix. Well done.

I agree, and also, Sudowoodo is gen 2 not gen 4, He got a pre-evolution at Gen 4 though so I'm not sure if this should be moved or not.

[KIRILL_Z]

- 18 Oct 2013 18:33 #82308

It's a great job aside from what TK said to fix. Well done.

I agree, and also, Sudowoodo is gen 2 not gen 4, He got a pre-evolution at Gen 4 though so I'm not sure if this should be moved or not.

Well, It got moved so I guess it should.

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Celebi has petit limbs, arms are too big, too long and too square
feet are also too big

If Celebi doesn't stop eating soon, the limbs wont be petit.

[KIRILL_Z]

- 19 Oct 2013 10:26 #82452 Also, does anyone else have any criticism, or is it ready to be submitted for approval?

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Celebi has petit limbs, arms are too big, too long and too square
feet are also too big

If Celebi doesn't stop eating soon, the limbs wont be petit.

[Nova Spartan]

- 19 Oct 2013 10:30 #82454

Also, does anyone else have any criticism, or is it ready to be submitted for approval?

Well, both Sudowoodo and Bonsly look basically ready for approval to me, but I suggest waiting to see what other people think first.

Although, Sudowoodo's head thing could still be slightly bigger.

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While you're waiting for people to post, I suggest making the Shiny Texture for the two if you haven't already.