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By SPG
#127141 lets try and not do the picture thing anymore, I need to find a way to explain things with words that make sense
anyways
your body is far too long, it should be short and fat (a little bit longer thne the head, but as wide as the head)
the head needs to be slightly bigger then the body, the body is about 2/3 of the head in height (side view if you dont understnad what i mean)
you havew the eyes perfectly on the side of the head, they should actually be on the side (so like /\ not like | |)
the texture of the mouth is also more of a triangle with the point going to the center of the face, could just be the weird shape of the head of your mdoel thats screwing that up, because it does point in the center
the big section the wind needs to be slightly more fat and taller, and the little part of it needs to be less prominent when extruding out and skinnier (the smaller part should only be 1/3 of the fat wing)
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