- 30 Sep 2013 03:05
#78599
Humm... Okay I am going to give this my best feedback I can do >8D
I am going to word this like what edits I would do if I where working on this, and I am going to try not to be vague (because saying the head looks wrong is not very helpful XD)
I dont know if this will work, but why dont you try to make the white "rim" around the eyes thicker, take the second loop on the eyes (the inner one) and make it smaller, but make it stick out more, sorta where the red part of the eye lightens to a lighter pink?
http://cdn.bulbagarden.net/upload/0/07/344Claydol.pngAs for the shape of the head, try adding another loop around the topside of the head, where the faces are the longest, and then scale that loop up until its only a bit smaller then the lower one.
Another tip would be for the "hands" try scaling up where the little nub attaches to the rest of the hand so it flows more into the rest of it, like in the picture I linked above.
I am sorry if this is confusing, or if I am intruding to much x.x