[KIRILL_Z]

- 16 Oct 2013 19:51 #81999 So, Bonsly is cute, and as you know, I'm decent when it comes to cute pokemon, since they are usually simple. Here it is:

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Perspective View (for Nova)

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Front View

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Side View

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Top View

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Weird Angle (I seem to be fond of these)

Shiny:

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Will make Sudowoodo as soon as homework lets me.

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Celebi has petit limbs, arms are too big, too long and too square
feet are also too big

If Celebi doesn't stop eating soon, the limbs wont be petit.

[Nova Spartan]

- 16 Oct 2013 20:17 #82004 Thanks for having a persp view this time, though it looks like it really doesn't change that much as I thought it did lol.

Anyway, you did a really great job so far, though there are a few things.

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-His leaf spheres on the top of his head need to be bigger (you may need to move the spheres in their directions away from each other a little bit.)

-His feet should also be a little wider.

-The bumps on each side where the legs come out is pulled out a little too far, I think.

Other than that, fantastic job.

[KIRILL_Z]

- 16 Oct 2013 20:49 #82007 Thanks, I'll work on it as soon as homework permits.
*glares at essay for history*

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Celebi has petit limbs, arms are too big, too long and too square
feet are also too big

If Celebi doesn't stop eating soon, the limbs wont be petit.

[fosterd]

- 17 Oct 2013 05:29 #82045 are you doing sudo woodo and looks good but nova sparten is right they need to be fixed

[KIRILL_Z]

- 17 Oct 2013 06:04 #82049

are you doing sudo woodo and looks good but nova sparten is right they need to be fixed

I already fixed the legs but haven't uploaded the pictures. I'll make Sudowoodo after school today.

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Celebi has petit limbs, arms are too big, too long and too square
feet are also too big

If Celebi doesn't stop eating soon, the limbs wont be petit.

[KIRILL_Z]

- 17 Oct 2013 19:02 #82159 I made Sudowoodo.

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Celebi has petit limbs, arms are too big, too long and too square
feet are also too big

If Celebi doesn't stop eating soon, the limbs wont be petit.

[KuryoZT]

- 18 Oct 2013 09:50 #82250 I never thought of Bonsly as cute, but that's just opinion.
Anyway, I also think the feet are too small, as are the green balls over its head.
Either that, or the face is too big. But should be simpler for you to just make them bigger, than make the head smaller.
And also, the part where its legs and its body touch, those are sticking out too much, while the "neck" is too thin. It should b wider and stick a bit more out.
Other than that, nothing else to say really, nice job.

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[KIRILL_Z]

- 18 Oct 2013 18:34 #82309 Update:
made Bonsly's feet wider (a bit), made the balls on his head bigger, and made the leg bulges smaller.

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Celebi has petit limbs, arms are too big, too long and too square
feet are also too big

If Celebi doesn't stop eating soon, the limbs wont be petit.

[Nova Spartan]

- 18 Oct 2013 19:43 #82324

Update:
made Bonsly's feet wider (a bit), made the balls on his head bigger, and made the leg bulges smaller.

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Alright, almost perfect. All you need to do now (which for some reason I didn't mention) is pull the vertices at the top of his head where the stick starts to come out, upwards right under where the branches begin to go sideways. If that even made any sort of sense.

This picture I posted earlier is a good reference:

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[KIRILL_Z]

- 18 Oct 2013 20:32 #82334

Update:
made Bonsly's feet wider (a bit), made the balls on his head bigger, and made the leg bulges smaller.

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Alright, almost perfect. All you need to do now (which for some reason I didn't mention) is pull the vertices at the top of his head where the stick starts to come out, upwards right under where the branches begin to go sideways. If that even made any sort of sense.

This picture I posted earlier is a good reference:

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Thanks, Nova, you are so helpful!

Like this?

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Celebi has petit limbs, arms are too big, too long and too square
feet are also too big

If Celebi doesn't stop eating soon, the limbs wont be petit.