By siverthei
#109477 This is is the first model I've made so I expect a lot of things to be wrong. Personally I'm happy with the model itself, but I'm not so sure about the texture/coloring. As you'll probably notice the lines aren't complete, that's because I don't really know if it'll be better if I don't have them.

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Latest update:
Now shiny! (and a few very slight adjustments)
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By lugiaisbeast101
#109491 You can keep the lines solid for the shell if you wish.

For the model, the body inside is more forward, if you do it correctly,

the tongue will come out of the shell more. There's also some

slight issues with the shell you can fix quite easily.

Otherwise, you did a wonderful job on the model.

(Don't go by my one picture, it's just to show a basic

outline of what you should do)

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This will help you a bit with the back

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By Arsonist
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ryancpexpert wrote:I also think your poly count may be too high

Sorry what? Where?
By siverthei
#109587 I've done a bit of tweaking on the model. I personally want to leave the drawn lines out(It's too hard to make them look good), but if you people feel those lines have to be there I'll add them them back.

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There's some things with the texture that still needs to be fixed, but I'll have to do that tomorrow
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By Arsonist
#109594 Working with so few polys is a bit of a pain in the ass, once you get the general shape down, add a few edge loops. Don't go crazy, but this is a VERY common pokemon, and needs to look a bit better in terms of shape. That's something that's not going to happen unless you add some polys
Again, don't go crazy.
By Milo
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ryancpexpert wrote:I also think your poly count may be too high

He hardly has any polys. I agree with arsonist that it needs a little more.
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