[pegguinni128]

- 06 Mar 2014 19:54 #115406 could you move the eyes down a bit more? also, make the hair a bit thicker.

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[CypriC]

- 08 Mar 2014 12:37 #115628 Update:
-adjusted hand length, and the hair shape overall
-made a quick textured version
-cut some polygons where possible (current poly count is 514)

I would greately appreciate advice regarding the poly count, specifically if the poly count has to go down more.
Thank you for the feedback!

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[AnDwHaT5]

- 09 Mar 2014 12:57 #115858 The face is a bit to far in. I suggest bringing it out a bit like in my reference picture below via bulbapedia. Also the arms actually have that piece bulging out and not as lines. I would suggest instead of texturing them in to make them. And finally the hair lines arnt right. As you can see here

Spoiler:

the hair goes into a split from the bottom. I think you have a excellent start however! Keep up the good work!

My reference image in full

Edit: Looks like the hair maybe able to be fixed by lowering the edge here

[CypriC]

- 10 Mar 2014 14:13 #116035 I adjusted the hair, brought out the face as much as I could, built the bulges from the mesh and erased the texture lines that were there.
I will adjust the mouth as much as possible and if it's not working out I will remake it. I will also try to reduce the number of polys in the hands.
Thank you all for the feedback provided so far!

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