[Vikerus]

- 20 Jun 2014 14:19 #128047 Great job on this and thanks for doing it. For feedback though seems like you could make the transition from lower jaw to neck a little more graceful and less hard edged. Take a look at the images I referenced for an idea of what I'm getting at. The head in all needs a little love and the snout is definitely not the right shape yet. Fix those things and I think this will be a lot better.

I made a little screen cap with the vertices pointed out that I think you would need to play with to fix the lower jaw.

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[SeanShirayuki]

- 20 Jun 2014 15:28 #128058

Just curious; Why does my post here keep getting deleted? :I I'm just saying how nice the model looks... Otherwise, I think the antennae need a little more length.

The antenna are quite long actually, it's just that i have them with their wavy look so they look shorter, when i straighten them out they'll look a lot longer. as for your post getting deleted, i wouldn't have a clue, this is the first time i've seen one of your posts here o3o to be completely honest, i dont even know how to delete someone else's posts.

Great job on this and thanks for doing it. For feedback though seems like you could make the transition from lower jaw to neck a little more graceful and less hard edged. Take a look at the images I referenced for an idea of what I'm getting at. The head in all needs a little love and the snout is definitely not the right shape yet. Fix those things and I think this will be a lot better.

I made a little screen cap with the vertices pointed out that I think you would need to play with to fix the lower jaw.

Believe me when i say that i've been playing around with those vertices since i finished the model lol. no matter what i do without adding more polygons it looks off to me but i'll keep trying and i'm going to straighten the antenna as soon as i get a chance.

[SeanShirayuki]

- 20 Jun 2014 16:12 #128063 ok, i checked on those vertices and tried a couple of things and i think i found something that makes the jaw look better and give a better transition into the neck, i moved around a couple of them and only had to turn 2 faces into tris from quads. i also straightened out the antenna and took out the flying pose, i still have that model on my comp in case SPG tells me that i need the model. please let me know if anything else needs to be edited on it and thank you all for the feedback, it helps a lot.

[FrozenJemima]

- 20 Jun 2014 16:26 #128067 there needs to be a flying animation, also the horns aren't gonna be animated so fix that, the tail is probably going to be animated tho

[Lizzy39632]

- 20 Jun 2014 16:29 #128068 The horns are gonna be animated stated by Il_lupo and there is no need for a flying pose since the animators can rig the model itself.

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[FrozenJemima]

- 20 Jun 2014 16:31 #128070 the feet are lazily made, they need to be more curved and realistic, not block with pointy claws

[SeanShirayuki]

- 20 Jun 2014 17:04 #128089 ok, all you had to do was tell me to round off the feet, i can assure you that nothing in any of the models that i've been making is "lazily made" i put a lot of hard work into every model i make....so, insults aside, all i can do is add a little more roundness to the top of the feet, i'm pretty sure i can find a way to do that and still keep the shape of the original reference image's foot, as for the rest of the foot, i cant really do much without adding even more poly's to it. the only blockieness that i see that you might be talking about is the flat part on the top and on the bottom of the foot which i cant really do much about since dragonite's standing. even the reference image i used is flat on the bottom of the foot and the reference image came from the model used in Pokemon BR since i read that the official models can be used as reference's.
Look under Plagiarism in SPG's post here

[TheGameAce]

- 20 Jun 2014 17:14 #128091

Just curious; Why does my post here keep getting deleted? :I I'm just saying how nice the model looks... Otherwise, I think the antennae need a little more length.

The antenna are quite long actually, it's just that i have them with their wavy look so they look shorter, when i straighten them out they'll look a lot longer. as for your post getting deleted, i wouldn't have a clue, this is the first time i've seen one of your posts here o3o to be completely honest, i dont even know how to delete someone else's posts.

Great job on this and thanks for doing it. For feedback though seems like you could make the transition from lower jaw to neck a little more graceful and less hard edged. Take a look at the images I referenced for an idea of what I'm getting at. The head in all needs a little love and the snout is definitely not the right shape yet. Fix those things and I think this will be a lot better.

I made a little screen cap with the vertices pointed out that I think you would need to play with to fix the lower jaw.

Believe me when i say that i've been playing around with those vertices since i finished the model lol. no matter what i do without adding more polygons it looks off to me but i'll keep trying and i'm going to straighten the antenna as soon as i get a chance.

Ah Okay. I think maybe SPG was deleting them, because he said I was supposed to be posting constructive criticism :I Eh whatever.

Also, for the horn on top, I took some careful looks at pictures, and I think it needs to be a bit smaller.

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[SeanShirayuki]

- 20 Jun 2014 17:27 #128092 funny enough, the horn tip was the only thing that didn't match up on the 2 pictures which just struck me as odd at first but i decided to go with the higher point, so i'll lower it to the other picture's height and bring the tip forward a tad so that it doesn't look like it's pointing backwards, i see now what ryancpexpert was saying about the horn lol

[SeanShirayuki]

- 20 Jun 2014 17:47 #128095 alrighty, i finished editing the feet and the horn, the horn was moved down and forward a tad and i added more of a shape to the feet without having to add too many polygons. again, thank you for all the helpful input ^.^