[dyinghere]

- 10 Jan 2015 07:00 #144398 Hm, I feel like the texture needs more definition, it looks a little bland right now. {Though I have no idea how you can go about doing that; maybe someone else can give better advice >.>} I think the outline of the eyes should be a little thicker too.

The model itself, I think the nose needs to be a little bit wider. It looks too narrow when looking top-down.

The image shows it more bulbous, and yours tapers a bit too much.

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[joshua_DA]

- 11 Jan 2015 04:06 #144477

Hm, I feel like the texture needs more definition, it looks a little bland right now. {Though I have no idea how you can go about doing that; maybe someone else can give better advice >.>} I think the outline of the eyes should be a little thicker too.

The model itself, I think the nose needs to be a little bit wider. It looks too narrow when looking top-down.

The image shows it more bulbous, and yours tapers a bit too much.

fixed the problem about the nose tapering too much and thickened the eye outline a bit. about the shading, that's a problem on my part as im not that good in shading at the moment so i apologize for that

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